From 129893c53995c587c50348d0a430293a90a4e6a2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Tw93 <tw93@qq.com>
Date: Thu, 2 Mar 2023 17:47:19 +0800
Subject: [PATCH] :art: Optimizing the user prompts during command usage

---
 bin/cli.ts            | 8 ++++----
 bin/helpers/rust.ts   | 2 +-
 bin/options/icon.ts   | 2 +-
 bin/options/index.ts  | 2 +-
 bin/utils/url.ts      | 2 +-
 bin/utils/validate.ts | 2 +-
 6 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

diff --git a/bin/cli.ts b/bin/cli.ts
index 9c020b8..2203781 100644
--- a/bin/cli.ts
+++ b/bin/cli.ts
@@ -9,20 +9,20 @@ import { checkUpdateTips } from './helpers/updater.js';
 // @ts-expect-error
 import packageJson from '../package.json';
 
-program.version(packageJson.version).description('A cli application can turn any webpage into a desktop app with Rust.');
+program.version(packageJson.version).description('A command-line tool that can quickly convert a webpage into a desktop application.');
 
 program
   .showHelpAfterError()
-  .argument('[url]', 'the web url you want to package', validateUrlInput)
+  .argument('[url]', 'the web URL you want to package', validateUrlInput)
   .option('-n, --name <string>', 'application name')
   .option('-i, --icon <string>', 'application icon', DEFAULT_PAKE_OPTIONS.icon)
   .option('-w, --width <number>', 'window width', validateNumberInput, DEFAULT_PAKE_OPTIONS.width)
   .option('-h, --height <number>', 'window height', validateNumberInput, DEFAULT_PAKE_OPTIONS.height)
-  .option('-f, --fullscreen', 'makes the packaged app start in full screen', DEFAULT_PAKE_OPTIONS.fullscreen)
+  .option('-f, --fullscreen', 'start in full screen mode', DEFAULT_PAKE_OPTIONS.fullscreen)
   .option('-t, --transparent', 'transparent title bar', DEFAULT_PAKE_OPTIONS.transparent)
   .option('-r, --no-resizable', 'whether the window can be resizable', DEFAULT_PAKE_OPTIONS.resizable)
   .option('-d, --debug', 'debug', DEFAULT_PAKE_OPTIONS.debug)
-  .option('-m, --multi-arch', "Supports both Intel and m1 chips, only for Mac.", DEFAULT_PAKE_OPTIONS.multiArch)
+  .option('-m, --multi-arch', "available for Mac only, and supports both Intel and M1", DEFAULT_PAKE_OPTIONS.multiArch)
   .action(async (url: string, options: PakeCliOptions) => {
 
     await checkUpdateTips();
diff --git a/bin/helpers/rust.ts b/bin/helpers/rust.ts
index a626818..9e9287a 100644
--- a/bin/helpers/rust.ts
+++ b/bin/helpers/rust.ts
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ export async function installRust() {
     await shellExec(IS_WIN ? RustInstallScriptForWin : RustInstallScriptFocMac);
     spinner.succeed();
   } catch (error) {
-    console.error('install rust return code', error.message);
+    console.error('Error codes that occur during the Rust installation process.', error.message);
     spinner.fail();
 
     process.exit(1);
diff --git a/bin/options/icon.ts b/bin/options/icon.ts
index 9fddd2c..2a12b97 100644
--- a/bin/options/icon.ts
+++ b/bin/options/icon.ts
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ export async function handleIcon(options: PakeAppOptions, url: string) {
 }
 
 export async function getDefaultIcon() {
-  logger.info('You have not provided an app icon, use the default icon.(use --icon option to assign an icon)')
+  logger.info('You haven\'t provided an app icon, so the default icon will be used. To assign a custom icon, please use the --icon option.')
   let iconPath = 'src-tauri/icons/icon.icns';
   if (IS_WIN) {
     iconPath = 'src-tauri/png/icon_256.ico';
diff --git a/bin/options/index.ts b/bin/options/index.ts
index efcf4f6..921ed59 100644
--- a/bin/options/index.ts
+++ b/bin/options/index.ts
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ export default async function handleOptions(options: PakeCliOptions, url: string
   };
 
   if (!appOptions.name) {
-    appOptions.name = await promptText('please input your application name', getDomain(url));
+    appOptions.name = await promptText('Please enter the name of your application.', getDomain(url));
   }
 
   appOptions.identifier = getIdentifier(appOptions.name, url);
diff --git a/bin/utils/url.ts b/bin/utils/url.ts
index fff707a..a3e4d8e 100644
--- a/bin/utils/url.ts
+++ b/bin/utils/url.ts
@@ -42,6 +42,6 @@ export function normalizeUrl(urlToNormalize: string): string {
   if (isurl(urlWithProtocol)) {
     return urlWithProtocol;
   } else {
-    throw new Error(`Your url "${urlWithProtocol}" is invalid`);
+    throw new Error(`The URL "${urlWithProtocol}" you provided is invalid.`);
   }
 }
diff --git a/bin/utils/validate.ts b/bin/utils/validate.ts
index a97821c..54add5b 100644
--- a/bin/utils/validate.ts
+++ b/bin/utils/validate.ts
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ import { normalizeUrl } from './url.js';
 export function validateNumberInput(value: string) {
   const parsedValue = Number(value);
   if (isNaN(parsedValue)) {
-    throw new Commander.InvalidArgumentError('Not a number.');
+    throw new Commander.InvalidArgumentError('The input cannot be a number.');
   }
   return parsedValue;
 }