diff --git a/en/eBook/11.1.md b/en/eBook/11.1.md
index cbcc651b..a185600d 100644
--- a/en/eBook/11.1.md
+++ b/en/eBook/11.1.md
@@ -59,9 +59,9 @@ In the following example, we pass a negative number to our `Sqrt` function. Chec
         fmt.Println(err)
     }	
 
-## Custom Error
+## Custom Errors
 
-Through the above description we know that error is an interface, so in the realization of their package, by defining the structure implements this interface , we can realize their error definitions , see the package from Json Example:
+Through the above description, we know that a go Error is an interface. By defining a struct that implements this interface, we can implement their error definitions. Here's an example from the JSON package:
 
     type SyntaxError struct {
         msg string // error description
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ Through the above description we know that error is an interface, so in the real
 
     func (e * SyntaxError) Error() string {return e.msg}
 
-Error Offset field in the call time will not be printed , but we can get through a type assertion error type , then you can print an appropriate error message , see the following examples:
+The error's `Offset` field will not be printed at runtime when syntax errors occur, but using a type assertion error type, you can print the desired error message:
 
     if err := dec.Decode(&val); err != nil {
 		if serr, ok := err.(*json.SyntaxError); ok {
@@ -80,20 +80,20 @@ Error Offset field in the call time will not be printed , but we can get through
 		return err
 	}
 
-Note that, the function returns a custom error, the return value is set to recommend error type, rather than a custom error types, particular note should not be pre-declare custom error types of variables. For example:
+It should be noted that when the function returns a custom error, the return value is set to the recommend type of error rather than a custom error type. Be careful not to pre-declare variables of custom error types. For example:
 
     func Decode() *SyntaxError {
-        // error , which may lead to the upper caller err! = nil judgment is always true.
-        var err * SyntaxError // pre- declare error variable
+        // error, which may lead to the caller's err != nil comparison to always be true.
+        var err * SyntaxError // pre-declare error variable
         if an error condition {
-            err = & SyntaxError {}
+            err = &SyntaxError{}
         }
-        return err // error , err always equal non- nil, causes the upper caller err! = nil judgment is always true
+        return err // error, err always equal non-nil, causes caller's err != nil comparison to always be true
     }
 
-Cause see http://golang.org/doc/faq#nil_error
+See http://golang.org/doc/faq#nil_error for an in depth explanation 
 
-The above example shows how a simple custom Error type. But if we need more sophisticated error handling it? At this point, we have to refer to net package approach:
+The above example shows how to implement a simple custom Error type. But what if we need more sophisticated error handling? In this case, we have to refer to the `net` package approach:
 
     package net
 
@@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ The above example shows how a simple custom Error type. But if we need more soph
 	}
 
 
-Place the call through the type assertion err is not net.Error, to refine error handling , such as the following example , if a temporary error occurs on the network , it will sleep 1 seconds Retry :
+Using type assertion, we can check whether or not our error is of type net.Error, as shown in the following example. This allows us to refine our error handling -if a temporary error occurs on the network, it will sleep for 1 second, then retry the operation. 
 
     if nerr, ok := err.(net.Error); ok && nerr.Temporary() {
 		time.Sleep(1e9)